Editing by Daisy

Over the last few days I have been managed to get feedback from our teacher and other students how have said the following things:

The titles all need to be the same size

To find some appropriate music

To finish the filming

So far I spend time remaking the Title logo as the following, which successfully fits in with our theme being Black and White productions. I managed to find a black masque and then copy it by making the other half white. We quite like this new title as it is an improvement from the otherone.

Now I need to finish editing as we only have one week left.

Feedback by Tolu

Aaron and some other members watched our trailer at the half way point. He gave us some very usefull feedback which included some of the advice that is part of our to do list bellow. He like the trailer so far but he feels we need more of a story and a wider range of shots that does not include hockey. We need to hint more at the romance with trailer. He adviced us to experiment more with the programme and use sound bridges and he stessed the importance of finding a sound track or sevral sound tracks that will help tell the story. This advice we are willing to take on board and utilise to improve the quality of our trailer.

Editing by Tolu

During our editing, there has been a lot of changes made. We decided to introduce a split screen at one point during our trailer. We feel this gets across the message of lottie having to choose between hockey and Henry and helps us tell the story. Moreover, Daisy has redesigned our company logo and we agree that it is an improvement. She did this using photoshop and utilising the same method i used in creating the first company logo.

Filming By Daisy

We have just got back from holidays and still have to do some crucial filming.
These are some things we still have to do:

1.) Film Lottie and Henry together, one shot of them on a bench, one walking holding hands around the school campus. To film this weekend.

2.) Find appropriate music for our trailer

3.) Make a new film logo

4.)Edit the begining to add in the new shots of girls hitting into the goal

5.) shot of an aspect to Lotties normal life, frineds and school

After all this our film will be finished.